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I think the only thing that I can see that appears a little off to me, is that this character requires a little more definition of musc...

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Hey guys, sorry I don't have any art to put up for you just yet. Life's just been a tad more hectic than I had anticipated it would be in recent months. Hopefully soon I will be able to post something worthy of you all. Thank you for listening/reading.
Shizuko Ninomiya (Smile) [V1] 
Due to my living arrangements I will be going dark after tomorrow for between 2-3 weeks, give or take a week. So feel free to leave messages, comment on things or whatever you like, just know that it will be awhile before I am able to respond to them or view your art.
I sincerely hope that by the time I return I will be able to show you all more of what I can do as an artist.
I will leave a post to note my absence before I leave officially tomorrow and will post another note upon my return.
Ayano Tateyama (Bows) [V12]
Thank you for your time and attention.
I think the only thing that I can see that appears a little off to me, is that this character requires a little more definition of musculature in the arms and that the hands are a tad thin, it gives them the impression to me that they do not quite fit with this character. A larger persons hands tend to be plumper and less delicate than say a thinner persons would.

Also is that a tail and if so is it coming out of her back or from under her skirt? If it is indeed a tail, a proper functioning tail on a human, or humanoid like this, would protrude from the body just above the beginning of your butt crack, maybe a little higher.

As this is not your character, I believe that is what you said above, I will not rate Originality higher than one star. Please do not take that as an insult to the work you have done on this piece.
Announcement: my OC's, particularly Euroah, Boroni and Iris (who you have not met yet, but will I promise) will be subject to small and large design changes in the coming months as I am in the middle of a designing phase for a large project I am currently and will continue to work on throughout the year, and as far as I can see, into next year as well. Not Only will pictures of my OC's be appearing, I imagine landscapes and other design work, that will also be subject to redesign, will pop up in this time frame.

I would also appreciate any constructive criticism you might have for any of my work, it will be of immense value to me.

Ayano Tateyama (Bows) [V12]

Thank you for your time.
Dear diary I got a decent discount on my new minion (I think I will call him Fluffy) by trading in frequent flyer miles. Now my place is clean and I didn't even have to lift a finger, even got the torture chamber up and running now those who have wronged me shall begin to pay for their wrongdoings against me in blood curtailing screams.
*BWHAHAHAHAHAHAH*

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demonic-brute Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Happy Birthday!! :nuu: Have your cake and eat it too 
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T3rrorT1ts Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Happy birthday~ hope you have a nice day :3
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SammyRose575 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks for watching me, and have a good day! :heart:
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DarthHugglesthe2nd Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2016  Hobbyist Artist
Your welcome. Think I might need a good sleep instead of a good day though, its nearly 3am for me lol But thank you for the thought.
:Sleep: 
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SammyRose575 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
Awwww nuuuuuuuuuuuu. Sleep well, Deviant!
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DarthHugglesthe2nd Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2016  Hobbyist Artist
I did, I slept well just not for terribly long.
 AKCat-yawn (Acchi kocchi)
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Ampraeh Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2016  Student Digital Artist
Thanks by Ampraeh  
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DarthHugglesthe2nd Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2016  Hobbyist Artist
You are welcome^^ Check out my DA if you want.
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vesssel Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2015
Thanks for the watch! Feel free to check out my Facebook page for more art. :D (Big Grin)
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Izunichi Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much for the watch, I appreciate it ;v;
Please take care and have a nice day ^u^ <3333
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